Overall the journalistic style and content is fairly strong Kedeidra, make sure to proof read your work and if you include quotes always say who they are from. You have had a good go at creating a professional magazine layout in terms of columns, drop cap and images. The article neds a title and for the magazine title Vibe to be much smaller. Also think about the placement of a pull quote more carefully in the future, link it to the image. Good first piece. Amy
Overall the journalistic style and content is fairly strong Kedeidra, make sure to proof read your work and if you include quotes always say who they are from. You have had a good go at creating a professional magazine layout in terms of columns, drop cap and images. The article neds a title and for the magazine title Vibe to be much smaller. Also think about the placement of a pull quote more carefully in the future, link it to the image. Good first piece.
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